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infinite labyrinth chapter 1 by !ACINOM18:iconACINOM18:



~ you hear Yelling..  in the dark and things breaking and the sound of footsteps.. you finally see feet.. the image in black and white.. you hear crying and a gunshot and the scene cuts away... to some weird place thats surrounded by lava.. and you hear sounds of a massacre going on and a howl of anger and you see a powerful energy waves scream angrily.. you see an evil shadow and his glowing red eyes..

diablo: " i will find you and make you pay!!!!"

vioce: i know who did it.. Just come with me and i can help you.. but in my own way.. if i may

~The scene cuts to the view of a club and slowly we ( the viewers) approach inside the building, once inside you begin to hear the booming of music and see the swaying lights

drunken guy: hey there hot stuff d-did ya know i was once a ninja?. want to see my jutsu?

woman: * shifting her weight to her other foot, hand on hip * look mister, i'm trying to work here. so if you don't mind, are you going to order something or not?

drunken guy: :sad: so. you don't want to see my jutsu?

woman: * sighs * no. i don't want to see your justu, because like i've stated a million times before.. you.. are.not.. A NINJA!!  you're just another drunken bum who --

~ as she was lecturing him she felt a firm hand placed onto her bottem, her head spun around to see a skinny little punk right behind her

woman: * her face red * you best get your filthy hand off me or--

punk:  * with an evil sly grin * or what?. pull my hair?. you best be the to shut up bitch if you know what's good for you, now just relax little flower and let papa bee devour thy nectar. * he began to move his whole body up against her back when *

~ the frame quickly shoots to the punks face, which is now wide eyed and out of breath, the screen moves back and you see the crowd of people. in the crowd you see the woman on her knees , the table supporting her upper body.. she stay frozen. feeling a warm substance that was on her lower back. she looks over her shoulders and sees the punk on his back severely bleeding from his lower regions. she observed it closer and saw he was stabbed from behind literally and the gash went all the way to the front, so his blood poured a little on her back.

~ the woman looked at her surroundings, all she saw was the crowd and her boss making a call to the police and the hospital. all these people and not one looked like they held or consealed any weapons. or that had a face of a true criminal, until she heard a low vioce come out of the crowd

shadow: anytime now would be nice woman , i didn't get my ass all the way here to watch you stupid people fondle each other in public, i came here for a drink.

~ her eyes shot to a corner and out of blue she saw a dark shadow appear. the woman made her way past the flabbergausted crowd and to the shadowed figure.

woman: a-re you the one who helped me?

shadow: * his eyebrow arched * help?. listen woman i didn't slay that maggot to "help" you. i slayed him because he was slowing you down, and you are the only waitress on this shift are you not?. so clearly he was in the way of my drink. and now that he's out of the way . can i order my fu*ken blasted drink now?

woman: well, i'd love to but , you see after the stunt you just pulled we probably are going to close the club  til further notice, plus you shouldn't be here , the cops might arrest you for attempted murder..

shadow: :angry: WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU CAN'T GIVE ME A DRINK!. YOU CAN POUR A GLASS IN 20 SENONDS CAN'T YOU!. ITS NOT LIKE I ORDERED A COMBO FU*CKEN  MEAL DAMMIT!!!!

woman: i'm terribly sorry sir but if there's anything else i can do to help you with I --

shadow: * thinking * anything?

~ the dark figure began to have an evil grin, the woman was about to back off.

shadow: * moves out of the shadows * ( he had spiky hair brown hair and blood red eyes, he was dressed in a baggy light green shirt and baggy brown shorts, he sported a blue head band and was bare- foot he looked like a punk as well or an earthy guy ) well you wouldn't mind having a roommate for a while will you?

woman: uh.. what are you implying? * her mind racing with images of him making moves on her *

shadow: * slightly annoyed * look woman, i have no intention of "touching you" i  *a vein begins to pulse * look woman i just got to this place a good hour ago and i for one don't have this money you people need to pay for hotels I--

woman: so, you're homeless?

shadow: * eyes shift * ( he notices the cops and ambulance arriving ) we can discuss this elsewhere.. where do you live?

woman: my house is on Filler street, the one thats cream white and has hunter green framing.

shadow: perfect.

~ as soon as those words exited his mouth they were off * she was on his shoulder while he dashed like lightning *

woman: how are you doing that?. you're almost as fast as a car.

shadow: dis it.

~ he placed her on the sidewalk and gruffly waited for a response

woman: * she stood there staring at him with her head tilted * huh?

shadow: I SAID IS THIS YOUR HOUSE!.. GOD WOMAN, DOES HUMANS HEARING WARE OFF SOON AFTER BIRTH!

woman: i'm so sorry its ju- * she notices his patience was wearing thin * yes. yes this is where i live * she goes to the door and unlocks it and motions him inside *

~ as he walked inside he heard a giggly voice coming from one of the rooms

Mr giggles: ( offstage) ^_^ did you drag another toy here? * giggles * don't be to loud tonight.. i got to wake up early tomorrow hahahahaha!!!!

woman: SHUTUP RICOH OR I'LL SHOVE YOUR MALE HOTTIES CALANDER....... IN MY ROOM.. HA!!!

shadow: who the hell was that?. your sister? ( sounds cute)

woman: -_- no. that's my 19 year old homo brother.

shadow:0_0 * horrified * no way. NO FU*KING WAY I ALMOST HIT ON THAT!. i think i'll take my chances on the street thank you!

ricoh: * pouting * aw! so no hottie for my sexy body tonight * has lazy eyes aiming at the newcomer , licking his lips *  *in a low sexy tone * hmmm...

shadow:  * in the corner vomiting *

ricoh: * walks to the stranger, watching his steps and with the cutest face ever :smile: *  i was just joking man.. chillax, yes i bend that way but you're not my type anyway, you'd be a nice.. older brother.. * in a soft tone * and be careful.. that sweet innocent act at the club is a lie.. she can be a real bitch here at home.. oh and if sh-

woman: I NEARLY GOT RAPED AT WORK AGAIN, AND HE KILLED THE BASTARD!

shadow: again?so does this mean your body is blemished?

woman: no, i usually kick there asses to the curb but today for some reason i was caught off gaurd.

ricoh: * eyes bulging * you brought home a slaughterer!

woman: i didn't even say that yet!!

ricoh: AH HA!! I KNEW IT! * points his finger at his sister laughing with such enthusiasm his gut may well burst *

woman: punk

ricoh: slut maggot!.. he's sexy!

shadow: i thought i wasn't your type.

ricoh: * paused * I LIED!! * runs away at high speed *

woman: that's my brother for you .. so anyway * turns to the stranger * since its already getting uncanny that my brother got introduced to the readers before we did, i'll just introduce myself already.. My name is Natsumi Eiken, what about you buster. what's your story?

shadow: that is none of your concern woman. Besides why would you want to know anyway. just be appreciative that i spared your life, i'm still pissed at my lack of a drink remember?. if you'll excuse me i'm going to out and catch dinner.

natsumi: ( jeez, and i was thinking of him as my hero?) * walks over to him *  listen buddy, i know i am indebted to you for saving me back there,even if it was for a stupid drink, fact is i wasn't raped cause of you. its just i didn't see you do it, nobody did. are you a real ninja?

ricoh: a ninja?. here in the United States of Assholes? What are you going to tell me next.. that we can live in space without helmets? seriously is he a ninja ( is there a an escapee that left japan and they sent him to assassinate the punk.hmmm?) hey sis, guess what i figured out.. that punk that was going to rape you was a refuggee from japan and this guy here is a ninja sent by lord himikage sama to assassinate that punk by daybreak or it could be the end to future gener-

natsumi: * slaps her hand to his mouth * shut up ricoh before you make MORE of an ass of yourself. Now go watch your a -nini or whatever and vanish.

ricoh: * grabs her hand and shoves it off his mouth * ITS CALLED ANIME! YOU ILLETERATE  UNCONTROLLED MONKEY!  AN-UH-MAY!! * crosses his arms across his chest and leaves again in a huff *

natsumi: * flips him off * at least i don't need to add counterfeit hair extentions to my head shitball!!

ricoh: * double flips her off and rips of his red part of hair * nya nya it may be fake but at least i don't stuff my bras ( even though i don't need to because i'm a boy) * he turns and moons her * how do you like that sister shitface! * waddles down the hall laughing hysterically *

natsumi: that little! * sighs * oh wait a minute * turns to a shadow of herself * huh? now where did he run off too?.. oh well he'll be back. ( i'll start dinner for us)

~ the frame continues on at the hospital room where that punk resides , he's currently flipping through channels in his i.c.u room

punk: * cracking his knuckles * damn that whore, when i get out of here i swear!- ( what was that.. i swear i heard the door open) * he turns away from from the closed door  * WHA!! WHO THE HELL .. HOW DID YOU GET IN HERE!!

~ the shadows figure crouched in front of the punk licking his lips

shadow: * in a low creepy tone * is that the tone you prefer to take with me?

punk: i can take whatever tone i want beach urchin!

shadow: * his eyes narrow slowly as a smirk approuched his lips * well now that is over with and settled. sweet dreams... asshole

~ he's facing the readers and you his jaws drop and his face hastily flash close to the screen then it fades and all you hear is a squashy sound and crunching of bones and a lip smacking and then it ends with a belch

--  A/N:interuption------------------------------------- be back in two hours---------- AN: i'm back.. i had GED class to go to ^_^ well on with the story-----

~ at natsumi's house

ricoh: ( i wonder of there's a site about dust bunnies) oh well, better get cracking, the poem won't type itself  * his fingers reach for the keyboard *

natsumi: * in the kitchen * DINNER'S READY RICOH, COME GET IT!!!

ricoh: * gets off his butt lazily and goes to the kitchen * hey, where's the grumpy butt?

natsumi: you scared him away with your ugly face.

ricoh: *frowns * really?* looks down at the floor with huge hamster eyes * that's the 20th guest that's left for that * sighs *

natsumi: :hugs: ohh i was just playing with you * waving the palm of her hand up and down * he left to go eat out, he'll be back .now sit down .. i made your favorite.. green bean casserole and apple pie.

ricoh: :love:

~ the scene turns to a land of the rising sun background  with ricoh as a chibi clapping his hands cheerfully

ricoh: yay!!!!

~  later that night the front door creeps open and the shadowed figure slips in the house.. the housemates fast asleep

shadow: * wipes his face * i guess they don't lock their doors either. feh! that's stupid.

ricoh: ^_^ that's what i was going to do. i didn't want you sneaking back in the house just to get into my room :blowkiss:

shadow:0_0 * twitch *

ricoh: * has a sinester smile on his face * :laugh: i kid , i kid!!! your room is next door to natsumi. i'll show you .. now come in you night owl * tugs at him * what's your name anyway? i wanna know.. and i bet the creator is tired of typing shadow all the time, hmmm? * shoves him down the hall *

shadow: :angry: if you MUST know. my name is Jaden.. there! you satisfied now fruit cup?

ricoh: :dance: more than satisfied .. it makes our lines easier when we know your name * giggles * now hurry and get to bed before natsumi catches you.. she'll cut your bum off and nail it to a wall

~ the two scatter to their rooms and the screen fades and before it totally blacks out you hear a giggle

ricoh: heh, heh.. bum * chuckles *

TBC...?

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~ : that means me narrating.. like " the scene starts..." sometimes i narrate in the characters sentence like

jaden: * he got sick and tires of being told what to do by the cops so he got his sword and cut their belts and caused their pants to fall *

either that or its a paragraph all its own..

* : that is the characters actions during a place in time..

(     ) : the parenthisis are what the characters are thinking..

i know i should have written this on top but oh well.. just read it now then go back and re-read the story if it confused you the first time..  yup.. if you want to know about a character i will tell you... depends what you're asking ( i don't wanna spoil the story to much ) but i hope you like it..  this story contains my original characters and storyline.. so ITS MINE! ^_^

Infinite Labyrinth (C) acinom18
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Author's Comments

yup when word are like this :word: means.. it was originally in emoticon form.. ( this was in my journal before)
yup.. this is the real story.. the beginnig .. please read it all an tell me your fave parts ^^ i'll appreciate your input XDD

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:icontheakker3:
wow

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I am AKKERMAN, I am a different type of artist than anyone on this site.
:iconacinom18:
yup.. ^w^ i had this in my journal.. but nobody read them there.. so i finally figured out how to post writing.. ^w^ thankies for reading

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Every Anime has at Least one Pantyshot or boob jiggle.. its practically a Law :D
:icontheakker3:
you bet

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I am AKKERMAN, I am a different type of artist than anyone on this site.
:iconacinom18:
i posted chappie 2 0w0 ^^ * hug* thankies :heart:

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Every Anime has at Least one Pantyshot or boob jiggle.. its practically a Law :D
:icontheakker3:
oh yeah

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I am AKKERMAN, I am a different type of artist than anyone on this site.
:iconacinom18:
^w^ :dance:

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Every Anime has at Least one Pantyshot or boob jiggle.. its practically a Law :D
:iconthebritishbunneh:
punks make me wiggle ~
that was probably my favorite part
does that make me weird

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why does she sell sea shells by the sea shore when you could just pick them up :c
:iconacinom18:
^w^ nah... you not weird :3

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Every Anime has at Least one Pantyshot or boob jiggle.. its practically a Law :D
:iconthebritishbunneh:
yayz c:

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why does she sell sea shells by the sea shore when you could just pick them up :c

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